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Always On My Mind

Posted by Zach on February 4, 2010 at 7:25 PM

Hey guys, I write songs and poems and I would love to hear your feedback!


I silently gaze into her gleaming eyes,

only I can see her many hidden lies,

I never said a word,

because my thoughts didn't need to be heard,

 


She acts like she doesn't know,

but when we're alone it begins to show,

all of those lies begin to fade away,

but it didn't help at all my dismay,

 


I can't get over this feeling,

I don't know what to do,

my heart feels like it's peeling,

to show her what's true,

 


I will be there for you,

no matter what we go through,

you are always on my mind,

and I don't know what I'll find,

 


if only I'd asked her,

a little earlier,

but it is too late now,

and I wish that I knew how, but,

 


I will be there for you,

no matter what we go through,

you are always on my mind,

and I don't know what I'll find,


I'm walking through a desert storm just trying to get to you,

Oh darling, you have broke my heart in two,

Oh, yes I know it was you,

no denying that it was you,

 


You painted my world all different colors,

splashed them around with daisies and flowers,

Then tore it all down without a sound,

leaving my world all drowned, but,


I will be there for you,

no matter what we go through,

you are always on my mind,

and I don't know what I'll find


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6 Comments

Reply Zach
08:27 PM on February 08, 2010 
)xXTheRadiantWreckXx( says...
I'll have to write it down so ppl can see

Thanks, I'm working on the music now, I keep getting side-tracked so it's been a little difficult to write the music, but it's coming.
Reply )xXTheRadiantWreckXx(
08:20 PM on February 08, 2010 
Zach says...
Thanks, and I'm sure yours aren't that bad.

I made one X3
Reply Sean S.
10:56 AM on February 08, 2010 
Assuming this is a true story, keep by her side, be a good friend without any pressure on her. Kindness shows love. As far as lyrics go, they rock. Do you have any music to it??
Reply )xXTheRadiantWreckXx(
07:37 PM on February 07, 2010 
I'll have to write it down so ppl can see
Reply Zach
05:56 PM on February 05, 2010 
Thanks, and I'm sure yours aren't that bad.
Reply )xXTheRadiantWreckXx(
04:06 PM on February 05, 2010 
wow thats amazing. i also write songs but they are not nearly as good.